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Thursday, April 2, 2020

first post blog hop 1


Once there was an evil bad guy called Megadoom.
Megadoom wanted to take over the world. he could of done it if
the SUPER SQUAD hadn't come  to stop
him. the name of the Super Squad team members were
power - up mr. muscles sally zoom captain radical boom
boxer gold star. Megadoom had lasers he
was blinding them with science but lucky for them
they had sun glasses Megadoom said who wears
sunglasses at night. then sally zoom find the cord to the lasers.     
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6 comments:

  1. AnonymousApril 2, 2020 at 3:09 PM

    Hi Daniel,
    This is an exciting story. Your Super Squad characters sound very exciting. When you write Chapter Two could you tell us what they look like and what their powers are??
    Mrs Roach

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  2. AnonymousApril 2, 2020 at 3:30 PM

    Hi Daniel
    what an action packed story for your first blog comment.
    I love the names that you called your squad.
    I am so glad they had sunglasses on to save them from the lasers.
    What is going happen next??

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  3. AnonymousApril 5, 2020 at 8:48 AM

    good job daniel. from Zoe

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  4. AnonymousApril 7, 2020 at 9:33 AM

    hi Daniel I love Love Love your story you did a awesome job. Kapai.

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  5. Melissa LoverApril 7, 2020 at 12:47 PM

    Hi Daniel,
    Wow what an exciting story that you have written. The names of your characters are very creative. Can't wait to hear more of your story :)

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  6. AnonymousApril 30, 2020 at 6:03 PM

    so so cool

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