The story about a little girl who feel in a hole
Once upon a time there was a little girl and she was called Millie. She was a happy girl. One day she was walking down the forest path looking at deers and rabbits jumping and running around. then she fell into a hole in that hole she saw a door and it had some writing on it . whoever answers this password and gets it right the door will open. she said the password right and the door opened in that door minions were living there . they fought Earth was alien world and minions world was cool and people were weird and minions were cool
The end.
Hi Daniel,
ReplyDeleteWow what excitement you have created in your story. I really like the part about a magical door, and having to guess the password so it opened. I wonder what the pass word might haven been. How would you feel if you fell down a hole?
Hi Daniel,
ReplyDeleteI like the way you turned the worlds around and Earth was the Alien land. I wonder if she will stay in the Minion land.
Mrs Roach
Hi Daniel,
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed your story! I like the way you started with the character going for a walk in the forest and then your imagination took over with the secret door to a new world. I wonder what is going to happen to Millie next? Have you been going for any walks?
Rachel.